Communication deliverables peer review

You are now the manager of the other members in your group.

They have proposed one/two pieces of communication that aim to implement the company’s marketing plan.

Your task is to assess and provide feedback on the proposed communication deliverable(s) by completing the questions on the following slides for each deliverable. (Copy and paste slides if you are assessing more than one deliverable)

Communication purpose

Who is the intended audience for this piece of communication?

-Customers

What is the central message that the communication is trying to deliver?

-The marketing plan

Are there any problems with the choice of audience, the message or the medium/channel?

-I cant really tell what the channel is and there is a lot information on the post. I feel it would be better if it can be more succinct. Also, the message seems to not be very appropriate.

Communication Evaluation (highlight the grade you would award for each criteria)